Saturday, December 28, 2013

Adventure story 117. The Best

                                                          The Best
Seema was enjoying party then she turned around every point in life so then as she started wandering around on every point in life.When Seema was looking around that party was so perfect after all whole Nene family was so rich in life.They had made it in special way. Seema looked around.She saw everything was so expensive then she noticed that decoration which looked more than perfect.But then suddenly she remembered that she had not invited here to visit friends.She wanted to see Ketaki's painting.After all she wanted to present them to art gallery.They must had to look promising to every one's view.She couldn't just present them.She had to take a look first.Then she saw Ketaki.Ketaki had dress in perfect way.She looked beautiful in it. Seema could see that they had spend lot of money on her dressing.She was looking perfect like a princess and surrounded by her friends.Her friends were admiring her with their full heart. Seema noticed that Ketaki was just getting admiration from every side.She looked like someone who was just admired on every point and never criticized. Seema observed her.Then Seema's husband spoke"Ketaki was admired and pampered by her family.In fact she never suffered any problems.After all she was good looking and talented in life. Ketki had even talent of drawing.Her art will look so nice on canvas.She even win many drawing competition in her life.They all admired her."Seema smiled."She is beautiful but in case of drawing competition she won them when she was child but she had not participated in any competition since she grow up.""Come on.There are not that much drawing competition for grown ups.""But she could have participated in exams of drawing.""Come on.She must had some reasons.I have observed her painting.They are beautiful.You will love them.""Okay.Let's go."Seema looked as stubborn as rock.Her husband Om smiled.Seema acted this way every time when things turned into professional.She just never let her emotion dominate her at one point Om hated it and on another point he loved her attitude that was the thing which made her judgements best and truthful.He just hoped that Ketaki should pass her exam.After all he had given lot of hopes to his friend Soham Nene,Ketaki's father.Om hoped that this would be profitable to them all.Seem should sell Ketaki's painting and Soham would make business with Om.Then they lived happily ever after like their fairy tale.Om smiled happily after all they all had their ambitions and it was not wrong to get our ambition fulfilled while fulfilling others ambition.Om saw her paintings.They were really best.He had become fan of her art.Ketaki was not best but she was one of the talented and with help of Seema's guidance.She would become best.She was key to their future and they were key to her future.Om thought that he had arranged everything in best way for all.
       Ketaki's parents greeted Seema in special way.They were telling her everything about their daughter.It had just admiration inside their every sentence.Seema felt something from heart that Ketaki was too pampered.She was just admired by every one.Seema slowly noticed that everyone should start admiring her. All her Uncle and Aunties gathered around her and started admiring Ketaki's talent her nature and her looks.In fact her each and every aspect inside life she felt just one thought from mind.That she must not just trust those admiration.Seema " I like to see pictures."Om smiled"Of course.She was not going to trust us.She wanted to watch by herself."Every one looked tense.Om smiled and put hand on Ketaki's father.Om "Come on.Trust me.In life so on every moment I just watched her judging those paintings.I know that she would love it."Ketaki's father laughed.Then they all took Seema in that room.Ketaki came behind then she was walking slowly.Seema noticed that she was stressed .Ketaki was upset about everything in life.When finally Seema came to room,she started looking painting they were really good but she felt that still few things lack in it.Seema felt that on few spots.She used too bright colours.Those painting could become excellent with small changes.Seema turned to Ketaki"This is good but on that green trees.I feel you should little bit light colour next time and..."Then she gave Ketaki few suggestion.Ketaki nodded at every thing.Seema "So I want you to make approximately ten paintings because I will bring some people to look at them."Suddenly Ketaki looked very scared.Seema"What happen?Don't worry you can do it in perfect way."Ketaki's Mom "Come on.You paint so beautifully."Then they all turned when some guest who came inside started to admire one beach scene painted by Ketaki.That scene was really perfect.She had painted beautiful family with small kids.Seema really loved it.Then she felt that there should be more white colour in water to make it perfect then Ketaki could keep them.Then she suddenly got one idea.Seema"Ketaki why don't you make some changes in these picture and present them?I mean not all but I like few pictures.They are perfect after few changes."Everyone looked happy except Ketaki.Ketaki"No Madam I want every thing to be perfect.I will do everything in new and excellent way."Seema smiled happily.She liked that attitude.Ketaki's father patted on her back and said "Excellent.That's my daughter.She always want every thing perfect."Her Uncle"Ya.She never say no to hard work.."Then they all started admiring with such affection that Seema felt little bit jealous that she never got such supportive family while Ketaki had it.But inside in her heart Seema decided that she would bring out best painter hidden inside Ketaki and make her family more proud of her.After all they were the best so they deserved the best.
         As soon as Seema went away Ketaki felt so thrilled about it all.She was so sure that she wanted to do it.Everyone around her was admiring her painting.Even guests began to enter there all were admiring those painting.But then she heard that some were  criticizing some part.At first she felt hurt but then her mother patted on her shoulder.Her Mom"It is alright.They are outsiders so they will criticize.You need not to feel hurt.You can always win with this.Some people just have habit of criticizing."Then her cousin joined them"I think you are the best since whole family feel this way.They all are best.But still you got to make changes."Ketaki once again felt hole in stomach so her cousin felt that something was wrong.Ketaki"So you feel that it is wrong...""No..No.Not at all.But they are outsider and they will find mistakes.Think about those experts they also do same things.It is rule of world.Bosses always criticize."Ketaki felt scared but then her Mom interfered"Now that is enough.You are scaring her."Her cousin stopped but then suddenly her father joined them.Her father"She don't needed to be scared but if someone criticize her then it is common.She had to adjust it."Her Mom nodded."Of course she will understand it."Ketaki nodded.But when she turned to go back,she suddenly noticed that Seema was standing there and looking at her pictures.Ketaki just decided to run to her room because she was feeling so tired.That night she slept peacefully .But before sleeping she told her Mom that she should set alarm.Her Mom said"Yes."But next morning when Ketaki woke up,she wanted to move but suddenly her hand became senseless.In fact her whole body was moving except her hand.She started to push it.But it stayed there.Ketaki started screaming "Mom..MOm..Dad..Dad."Every one ran to her room.All guests who were their close relatives stayed in their house for that night.Her Mom ran near her."What happen?""Mom my hand is not moving.""What?Nonsense.Try it sweetheart."Ketaki tried hard but her hand was not moving at all.Ketaki"Mom I just can't move it."Her Dad "Come on.Try it."All family was around her.They tried to move her hand but it seemed impossible to do.They all were so shocked.Her uncle"What are you waiting for?Call Doctor."They immediately called Doctor.
        Then Doctor came to visit at home.They all were so shocked.Doctor came near her checked her hand.It was not moving.But still Doctor was so confused.Doctor hit her hand.But Ketaki said"I don't feel anything."Doctor was so shocked and confused.Doctor"I just don't understand.I feel that we have to make some tests.Until then let her take some rest."They all nodded and then everyone started taking care of Ketaki.All tests were done.But Doctor did not find anything wrong still Ketaki didn't able to move her hand for lot of days.They kept applying many medicines on her but everything looked useless.They even used some oil and massage therapy.One days Seema called,they told her clearly that Ketaki couldn't paint explain her condition.Seema was so shocked.She immediately came to visit Ketaki.Seema sat near her and started talking to her about other subject.Om was with her who was admiring Ketaki's courage.When Ketaki asked suddenly"Do you think it will effect my painting?"Seema was so nervous because inside her heart she had same fear.But still she consoled Ketaki"Don't worry you can do fine.Any way painting is not end of life.If something happen you can always choose something else."Ketaki started crying.Seema noticed that every one was looking at her with anger but she had to tell truth.After that for some days Ketaki's hand remained same way.Then finally it was cured.Ketaki started painting.But she started claiming that something was wrong with her hand and it was shaking.Seema visited her again.This time when Ketaki showed painting,she didn't have any confidence.Ketaki"I don't have that talent now.You can still show them.But I think that this is not right career for me.My hand was so shaking that I can't achieve that skill.I did my best but something is missing.I didn't have that talent as I had it in past."Seema felt so sad but she visited Ketaki's room.She felt so sad.She felt that Ketaki was telling truth something was missing.Seema"Don't worry.You can do it alright..."Ketaki nodded.But there was sorrow in her whole house.It was horrible.They lost their so talented artist to such mysterious sickness.Seema was so angry with Doctors.Only if they had treated her properly,her talent could have saved.They just didn't find cause until now.So Seema finally called experts to look at her paintings.Before going there she told them whole story.
        When experts looked at them with Seema,Seema clearly saw that they didn't like them at much.One of expert"They are good but not perfect."Seema nodded.Ketaki was on verge of crying same applied to her parents.When they started going down,suddenly Ketaki's Mom said"My daughter's old paintings were best."Then one of expert asked"Show me one.""Sure."Ketaki's Mom brought it.That expert looked confused.In fact every one of group looked confused.One of expert"Seema what is difference?It is same."Seema was so shocked.Seema looked at them carefully.It was right.They were same.Seema felt as if she was brainwashed.Seema "You are right."Ketaki came down on that moment.Before Seema could say anything that expert stopped her,that expert gave a card to Ketaki's Mom.That expert"Take her here.This is mental problem.We have come across lot of students like this."Ketaki's Mom was so shocked but when she looked at painting.She felt the same.After some days they convinced Ketaki and took her to psychiatrist.Psychiatrist talked with them for long time and then told  Ketaki to go out.Then Psychiatrist told her parents "She is suffering from Conversion reaction.""What?""She was always admired by you for her talent and slowly she became dependent on it.She didn't want to face criticism from outsiders.She was sure that expert would do it.She had desire to escape from unpleasant situation of those criticism so she unconsciously began to prefer this sickness.Then her second motive was to get sympathy and attention she got it all."Ketaki's Mom"So she was pretending?""Not intentionally.But due to her mental problem."Her Dad"You mean her painting was never that perfect but we all thought..""You are her family and you don't got that skilled knowledge.""Now what should we do?""Don't worry she would be fine?Do as I suggest."Then psychiatrist began telling them about her further treatment.Whole time Ketaki was relaxed and reading one nice magazine.She was sure that Psychiatrist must be telling her parent that she was fine.
                                                              The End

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